Review Detail of LiaFeil in A Glitch In The System(DC)

First of all, I'm sorry if my review accidentally offended you. I can't give more than 3 stars for this novel. Yes, I have to admit that the story at first was very interesting, but as the story progressed, the story began to decline to the point where it was very difficult for me to read it. First, the story doesn't match the title. It is true that at first there was a broken system at the beginning of the story. But as the story progresses, the existence of the system disappears. Second, the personality changes that are too drastic. at first MC is a good person. but as the story progressed it change. I know if someone who lives very long will lose their sanity or change into something else. but this change is too drastic. You know, actually, if you tell the part when he conquered Egypt and became emperor, that might be interesting. So basically, the writer skips the potential to make the story better and only focus on fanfiction. Remember, this novel doesn't belong to DC comics or anything. You can freely create your own story line, you can create new villains, you can change history. You can do everything. But it seems you are not aware of this. If you have experienced writing problems, you might consider rewriting the section when he parted ways with Rex. Third and most important, who is the main character of this story? Is that Raven Osmosis or Batman? or is it Anakin? Remember, this novel tells the journey of the MC, not someone else. It might be good to see the story from someone else's point of view, but remember, the story is still not over and the main character is still there. The main character very once appears when entering the DC arc. Even if he appeared, he did nothing but talk and talk. Seriously, that's so boring. The universe is very wide. But the main character does not seem to realize this because he only lives on earth and does nothing. If only he traveled around the universe, he might discover new things ... One more thing, actually this story would be good if it were not fanfiction from DC. Writer, have you ever considered making this novel an original novel? If you are interested, you might be able to tell stories like Egyptian rulers, Egyptian gods, Trojan wars, fight against Greek gods, destroy Greek gods / goddesses, Ragnarok, and when entering this modern era something like alien invasion or something like that. :)