Review Detail of CornboyRay in A Glitch In The System(DC)
Review detail
It was good in the beginning and had excellent writing but as the story continued it seemed to get more and more *******ish. The MC has a romance with Wonder Woman that seems cute at first, but then it turns into a cheesy generic love story with cheesy lines that normal people would never say. The MC starts out as a suave gentlemenIt but the more the story progresses he turns into your typical virgin edge lord anime MC. It's so sad because the story has such a unique and intriguing concept but it's potential gets squandered the more chapters get released. This is my personal experience though, you may like it or you may feel the same way that I do๐.
A Glitch In The System(DC)
GodofTruth
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then why did you do romance just stay on your lane man i don't understand why every novel needs a romance you could have just do the story without romance stop listening to those perverted freaks who ask for it
GodofTruth:Thank you for reading my novel though romance isn't my thing you see. thank you for your support and reading my novel.
kwertyu:then why did you do romance just stay on your lane man i don't understand why every novel needs a romance you could have just do the story without romance stop listening to those perverted freaks who ask for it
TheTrueGilgamesh:Che perverted filipino๐คฎ y u gay?? Reported now have fun๐
TheTrueGilgamesh:Why all filipino stink and gay? Y all filipino slave to chinese๐ค?
Slave? xD.. Maybe your the one who is slave of Chinese that you keep mentioning it. Don't add me ๐ ๐ . And if your hungry of dick why don't you just blow your father instead? ๐๐
TheTrueGilgamesh:Why you filipino slave to chinese?๐
Slave? xD.. Maybe your the one who is slave of Chinese that you keep mentioning it. Don't add me ๐ ๐ . And if your hungry of dick why don't you just blow your father instead? ๐๐
TheTrueGilgamesh:Why you filipino slave to chinese?๐
MALAKITITI:Slave? xD.. Maybe your the one who is slave of Chinese that you keep mentioning it. Don't add me ๐ ๐ . And if your hungry of dick why don't you just blow your father instead? ๐๐
Well that's alright as long as i'm not slave like you fools your history is full of traitors anyway your president most of them is so dumb that your first president have his own general killed in the midst of war๐ talk about filipinos
kwertyu:lol chinese got ****ed by japanese 300000 massacred **** you hahaha
TheTrueGilgamesh:Well that's alright as long as i'm not slave like you fools your history is full of traitors anyway your president most of them is so dumb that your first president have his own general killed in the midst of war๐ talk about filipinos