Quite poorly written, needs a dedicated editor but as english is not the authors first language all I can say is it needs improving so scored as a 3.6 total score. Updated at a reasonable speed. Story could use more fleshing out and characters are poorly written. World building is almost completely glossed over and history is not used to build the world into in whatever the author may want. Also I am sure the MC is insane.
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LIKEGodofTruth:Thanks for reading my novel. Thank you for pointing out my mistakes i'll try to work on my world-building, Character development and grammar.