Review Detail of kazesenken in Soul War: Journey to a new life

This is a well written story, which I have a hard time finding flaws in. From the beginning, the reader is drawn to the MC on a personal level. I can pretty much visualize what he sees and how he feels. The world building and character introductions are done at a nice pace, and the system is introduced in a way that makes sense. I applaud how you have structured your beginning in a way that makes it easy to follow. The only thing that felt off was how much younger the MC felt in his thoughts and actions. Not sure how to portray that well either, but maybe we can chalk it up to how the MC's core personality is. I truly found the basis of your novel to be captivating, and the execution to be superb. I left you some comments of what I was thinking as I read. You have my honest recommendation!