Review Detail of Melan_Hijack in Shut up: You, Nymphomaniac Evil Sword
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This novel has many different elements such as philosophy , leadership , alchemy, artifacts, high tech etc The problem is Dear author : you don't have to make a single mc experience them all and give us a bit of everything You could very well create many main characters with different backgrounds walking towards the very same goal as the mc Hope you consider my suggestion and tell me your opinion
Shut up: You, Nymphomaniac Evil Sword
Half_Blind
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your question made me think, what you were suggesting was a multiple character pov with equal importance or something similar, I personally prefer one single mc pov as main and then sometimes a side character pov as the story requires probably very few. But I have seen authors use the first type in a good manner, It's more of what you think suits you....hmmm...
Melan_Hijack:Thx for your efforts
Half_Blind: Hmm.. I narrate the story as it comes to my mind ... so it is possible it might go the way you suggested or it might not. ... truthfully it is much simpler this way, I hope you understand. Thanks for reading
Half_Blind:your question made me think, what you were suggesting was a multiple character pov with equal importance or something similar, I personally prefer one single mc pov as main and then sometimes a side character pov as the story requires probably very few. But I have seen authors use the first type in a good manner, It's more of what you think suits you....hmmm...