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Review Detail of Sani2341 in Shut up: You, Nymphomaniac Evil Sword

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While the writing is superb, *especially* considering the average her eon Webnovel, the constant paragraph long inner monologues are quite jarring to read. FOr me they just ripped me to far out of the narrative (what little there was so far) to continue reading on.

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Shut up: You, Nymphomaniac Evil Sword

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Thank you for the review...👍