Review Detail of N0_Hope in Insane traveller -PAUSED-
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The only thing to complain is the writing . The main idea is good, the stories are great but it quite difficult to understand some parts( Also I use google translator to read it in Spanish ) . Unfortunately I'll drop , maybe in the future if there are more interesting worlds and author gives more chapters for the " good worlds " then I might read this again .
Insane traveller -PAUSED-
wizardoggo
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It's nice to have a " god thing " to give MC powers and give him more for the misions but for example when he can only be there 5 years that makes things tricky as it means as you said he cannot have fun or create a " base " . The nice thing would be to have the option of a " list " or something that will allow him to choose worlds to be when he is not " working " . For what I understand the powers he get are random and he keeps the secondary powers but those are reduced depending on the world? Example: in Jacksparrow you said he has magic but not that much as there are not many " magical powers on there " right ? So he gets the " main power reward " and then the " power " he was " borned with " . right? Possible worlds for missions : The walking dead , highscool of the dead , zombieland ( you can even make the god say that the " zombies " will evolve so MC has to work smart and hard to achive the goal . ). Pleasure worlds and worlds for MC to build a base or get " items: * Overlord ( I love this anime ) * Everyone is a returnee ( MC makes the best weapons on the multiverse) I'm a bit tired so I'm forgetting many worlds but it would be nice for the MC to have a world base so he can store stuff , make his base and even bring waifus.. Also that thing of only being able to stay 5 years make the possibilities smaller for long term stories.
wizardoggo:And what world do you recommend for the future
about this is difficult to say how to improve. I read the english version and I can understand it ( my english is quite decent) but my problem is I'm lazy asf and I normally translate it to spanish and it looks superweird as it tries to translate lines that are how people speak " on the streets " ( I try to specify somehow the point ) . If for example you translate a standart novel then the translation is normally clean and easy as the lines are made in " a specific way " that translation is simple.
wizardoggo:Thanks for the review Ill try to improve and what do you mean its hard too understand do i move too fast or do i need to describe stuff more
Hmm ill try that so if i make say zombieland into his base world and then expand that into worldS he has been into would that be good for a ‘base’ or just keep 1 world as his base or something a ong those lines
N0_Hope:It's nice to have a " god thing " to give MC powers and give him more for the misions but for example when he can only be there 5 years that makes things tricky as it means as you said he cannot have fun or create a " base " . The nice thing would be to have the option of a " list " or something that will allow him to choose worlds to be when he is not " working " . For what I understand the powers he get are random and he keeps the secondary powers but those are reduced depending on the world? Example: in Jacksparrow you said he has magic but not that much as there are not many " magical powers on there " right ? So he gets the " main power reward " and then the " power " he was " borned with " . right? Possible worlds for missions : The walking dead , highscool of the dead , zombieland ( you can even make the god say that the " zombies " will evolve so MC has to work smart and hard to achive the goal . ). Pleasure worlds and worlds for MC to build a base or get " items: * Overlord ( I love this anime ) * Everyone is a returnee ( MC makes the best weapons on the multiverse) I'm a bit tired so I'm forgetting many worlds but it would be nice for the MC to have a world base so he can store stuff , make his base and even bring waifus.. Also that thing of only being able to stay 5 years make the possibilities smaller for long term stories.
N0_Hope:about this is difficult to say how to improve. I read the english version and I can understand it ( my english is quite decent) but my problem is I'm lazy asf and I normally translate it to spanish and it looks superweird as it tries to translate lines that are how people speak " on the streets " ( I try to specify somehow the point ) . If for example you translate a standart novel then the translation is normally clean and easy as the lines are made in " a specific way " that translation is simple.
Oh and i use superpower wiki for power should i give him specific missions to give him a specific power type from the superpower wiki like a token then i use the random thing and see what he gets?
N0_Hope:It's nice to have a " god thing " to give MC powers and give him more for the misions but for example when he can only be there 5 years that makes things tricky as it means as you said he cannot have fun or create a " base " . The nice thing would be to have the option of a " list " or something that will allow him to choose worlds to be when he is not " working " . For what I understand the powers he get are random and he keeps the secondary powers but those are reduced depending on the world? Example: in Jacksparrow you said he has magic but not that much as there are not many " magical powers on there " right ? So he gets the " main power reward " and then the " power " he was " borned with " . right? Possible worlds for missions : The walking dead , highscool of the dead , zombieland ( you can even make the god say that the " zombies " will evolve so MC has to work smart and hard to achive the goal . ). Pleasure worlds and worlds for MC to build a base or get " items: * Overlord ( I love this anime ) * Everyone is a returnee ( MC makes the best weapons on the multiverse) I'm a bit tired so I'm forgetting many worlds but it would be nice for the MC to have a world base so he can store stuff , make his base and even bring waifus.. Also that thing of only being able to stay 5 years make the possibilities smaller for long term stories.
you could do that but be careful with the powers. the ideal is make it so that the mc explains and uses it in a way to makes things easier for him. Also I didn't completely understood the "missions" he has to do. it would be nice for an explanation of the general" mition"
wizardoggo:Oh and i use superpower wiki for power should i give him specific missions to give him a specific power type from the superpower wiki like a token then i use the random thing and see what he gets?
wizardoggo:So should i put and Jack sparrow then said “Hello” and then barbosa said “Hi”
Well ill try to make him do that but im trting to keep it somewhat ballanced which is hard to do but ill try to now onto the mission thing if implemented i was gonna use it to interact with the main plot line more for the specific world or change someAthing in the main plot line now the MC dosnet have to do that as you can see woth him not interacting with the duchman or the kraken since it in gerneral is a bad idea and the missions would make him if he wanted to interact with it and that would grant him tokens which he can use on specific superpower types on the superpower wiki
N0_Hope:you could do that but be careful with the powers. the ideal is make it so that the mc explains and uses it in a way to makes things easier for him. Also I didn't completely understood the "missions" he has to do. it would be nice for an explanation of the general" mition"