Trash. Any plotline that tge author tries to present is there just brcause he thought that it would ve fun to drop some more **** into the pot. It makes absolutely no sense. He tries to make some setbacks for MC, as if MC recalled some other trauma, at this point it gets ridiculous. I understand wanting to give some depth to the mc, but first create any plot that would lead to this point. Bit just drop it like some **** cauze why not. You stupid? You have not once created any build up for ACTUAL setback. At this point you are just throwing in any bull**** clishe you can think of.
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