Review Detail of Plot_Armor in Gacha Sovereign

Chapter 36: dropping The novel starts with some promises in the first 10 chapters but quickly turns into "a new antogonist shows up criticizing MC background" "why are you with her lowly commoner" "sigh" "punch in the face" "how dare you raise your hand on me" "the king is my grandpa" This is absolutely breaking the story. Then there are more minor issues: - The leveling doesn't make sense so author had to divide level by 100 and create a rank system and levels were never heard of again. - The pills are completely overpowered - The gacha system takes a complete backseat on MC power trip: it could have been used for random missions for example - the progress is bland: pill forging, fights, there is no sense of struggle and so no sense of accomplishment. - somehow the useless MC is a fighter that knows dirty techniques like tripping people but nothing in his background or gacha rewards hints to that Lastly the grammar is passable (I read much worse on webnovel) however please be consistent, use past tense only and don't suddenly switch to present. You can use present for dialogues. Chapter 36 had a significant drops in quality of English with many verb missing like "confused" instead of "was confused". It didn't help that it was chapter where the "arrogant young master seeks a fight" trope was used for the 4th time in a row. .