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Fixten
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Transported to Another World? Cultivation World? A Modern World? How about mixing all of them? From countless planet in the Universe, Each planet has its own technology, culture, and civilization. There are many plot twists mixed inside where the usual 'Another World' actually holds more mystery. (Writing Quality): I'm not a native English speaker, and revision is under progress. There should be some mistakes left, but it shouldn't be that much. And there should be some cliches that presented in a bad way. It is also under revision. Although I can't completely erase that part cause it might affect the later story. I am rewriting it, so it can at least be presented in a better way. Unfortunately, the revision speed is rather slow since I need to make the new chapter as well. (Stability of Updates): 1 ch/day. But it could be 2 ch/day at weekends or holidays depending on how much time I have on that day. (Story Development): 'This is subjective'. I'm doing my best to present a good story, but it depends on your own preference too. One might say good, and one might say bad. Please don't force your ideal/preferences on this story, if you want the MC this way or the MC that way, you can try to write your own story. All in all, suggestions for a better story would be appreciated. (Character Design): MC has a deep-seated inferiority complex that built up for several years. It will be hard to get rid of all of that, logically. It wasn't something that you can say 'I want to change', and you will change 180 degrees. It will be a slow development of Characters and Personalities. (World Background): The story takes place in multiple world; most of the settings are fictional. If the world background is lacking some details, please do tell me 'which one' and 'what it is' so I can add a little tweaking in that part to make a better world. (Additional Comments): Many good scenes filled my mind that I can't help to write and share it with you all. Although, I know myself wasn't a great writer. I need all possible feedback to learn and improve. For you and me. Disclaimer: I will no longer respond to mean comments and reviews. All opinions are subjective. But, please, be gentle with any strong opinions. It's easy to say something behind a screen, but it can stick with people. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy my novel.

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SCP_009
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hahahahahaha

Mr_Unfortunate89
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Romance?

Neigh007
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What are the Tags of the Novel? Genre?

Fixten
FixtenAuthorFixten

Feel weird to see a full review from me to my own book

No_Reading_No_Life
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My important question: Is there harem? I am part of the #NoHaremSect The top 10 of my reading list all don't have harem 😋 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) A Sorcerer's Journey 06) The First Order 07) The City of Terror 08) Reverend Insanity 09) Gamers of the Underworld 10) Throne of Magical Arcana

Fixten:Feel weird to see a full review from me to my own book
Fixten
FixtenAuthorFixten

I am afraid you won't like then. This one has it. Although It developed the relationship first before they confirmed their relationship clearly with each other, you might still not like it

No_Reading_No_Life:My important question: Is there harem? I am part of the #NoHaremSect The top 10 of my reading list all don't have harem 😋 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) A Sorcerer's Journey 06) The First Order 07) The City of Terror 08) Reverend Insanity 09) Gamers of the Underworld 10) Throne of Magical Arcana
Deeran
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I'm screenshotting this for future purposes. thanks

No_Reading_No_Life:My important question: Is there harem? I am part of the #NoHaremSect The top 10 of my reading list all don't have harem 😋 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) A Sorcerer's Journey 06) The First Order 07) The City of Terror 08) Reverend Insanity 09) Gamers of the Underworld 10) Throne of Magical Arcana
Vegvisir
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As a fellow apprentice in #NoHaremSect i appreciate this list dearly :)

No_Reading_No_Life:My important question: Is there harem? I am part of the #NoHaremSect The top 10 of my reading list all don't have harem 😋 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) A Sorcerer's Journey 06) The First Order 07) The City of Terror 08) Reverend Insanity 09) Gamers of the Underworld 10) Throne of Magical Arcana
No_Reading_No_Life
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I will give it a try 😉

Fixten:I am afraid you won't like then. This one has it. Although It developed the relationship first before they confirmed their relationship clearly with each other, you might still not like it
Baewha_Main
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You must have a lot of bad experiences with women. You either aren't familiar with them or you're familiar with so few of them that you assume they're all the same. It's so incredibly embarrassing when someones written fiction fantasy story portrays their life situation so incredibly accurately. You should stop moping around in your house taking your problems out on fictional women that you've modeled after the women who've scorned you and go out into the world and become successful. The best revenge is to show them that you don't need them. That they didn't effect you. And that you are happier without them. Seriously dude.

Fixten
FixtenAuthorFixten

... No, I am not

Baewha_Main:You must have a lot of bad experiences with women. You either aren't familiar with them or you're familiar with so few of them that you assume they're all the same. It's so incredibly embarrassing when someones written fiction fantasy story portrays their life situation so incredibly accurately. You should stop moping around in your house taking your problems out on fictional women that you've modeled after the women who've scorned you and go out into the world and become successful. The best revenge is to show them that you don't need them. That they didn't effect you. And that you are happier without them. Seriously dude.
Ancient_Egyptian
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How many women they fall in love with him?

_Felix_
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I require the source of your profile picture

Fixten:Feel weird to see a full review from me to my own book
_Felix_
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We all did

Deeran:I'm screenshotting this for future purposes. thanks
LockYourHeartTight
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LOLOLOL Can we rename this novel to "how to go from incel to psycho in 5 days or less."

Lazarus_Yohanson
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K,l,l,l,I,,o,l,o,o

SCP_009:hahahahahaha
Daoist859424
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I some what like the story as of now it can only get better

Daoist859424
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I some what like the story as of now it can only get better

Dahfuk
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I am sorry I don't like ranting about novels But if you ever make a new book scrape the harem style it's just so cringy reading stuff like that I love the story writing and seeing you improve every chapter but the harem is just ruining it My opinion create just one female but she's super insecure and feels like her man is cheating on her but that's only his friends

Fixten
FixtenAuthorFixten

Ahaha. My first two ideas are harem. So, after I finish these two, I dont think I will make one. You can say I am finishing my harem ideas first.

Dahfuk:I am sorry I don't like ranting about novels But if you ever make a new book scrape the harem style it's just so cringy reading stuff like that I love the story writing and seeing you improve every chapter but the harem is just ruining it My opinion create just one female but she's super insecure and feels like her man is cheating on her but that's only his friends