Review Detail of tl_traveler in Rise of the Demon God

The story is like every other xanxia. Same underestimated mc, weak to strong, etc. The writing is terrible. Need editing. For example, it take 10 paragraphs to describe something that could be done in 1 or 2. Very wordy, repetitive, bad grammar, run on sentences, typos and wrong choice of words (vocabulary). I had to drop this after a dozen chapters.