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Review Detail of House in Rise of the Demon God

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House
HouseLv153yrHouse

Writing Quality⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐ World Background⭐⭐ I tried really hard to like this story. My biggest problem with the story is that it feels like its going nowhere. I feel like MC has no goal like noting to go for there also seems to be no enemy. So we just wave along with whatever is going on. I read like 270 chapters in 2 days and i can sum up what happens in a few lines. I feel like there is no substance in this story. MC just does stuff that's about it. We barley see MC fight we have noting to root for i think there are like 15 fighting chapters maybe less where MC is fighting. And when a fight happens MC is NEVER there. He is always comprehending some ****ty law or cultivation or whatever. So we get like 6-7 chapters of forgotten characters that fight and get like 1-2 where MC does something. MC also vanishes from the story for like 5+ chapters and we are like why do we need this info again? There are also some really stupid stuff going on like: - MC fell 5 minute's straight and had no injury what so ever (he was like just starting to cultivate to) Then he uses all his qi to fly up and he could not go more then 50m and fell down again. But 2 days later he can fly all the way up (like 300km) I think he was 8 grade mortal to like 5 grade second thingy So you are telling me he has 600 times more Qi now then he had b4? (also does not take him long to get to the top) -MC is flying up a mountain 15000feed (less then 5km) but it takes him 5h so you are saying me he is flying 5x slower then the average human walks? Then the next time he is flying super fast again its all over the place. He could fly 300km up a pit but he can't fly for a few km again next time cuz his Qi was out when he has allot more Qi now. -And don't get me started on the trails / dreams / ... we get like chapters upon chapters of random filler character fighting we never see again. -And After his first trail they said he will need to do another one at 20% of his bloodline yet now it looks like he will need to do it at 5% for no reason whatsoever. -... ... Then lets talk about MC. - He is fairly stupid makes retarded mistakes (obv stuff) - Should act evil when he acts more normal barley kills anyone - Cultivates like a hard demon cultivation thingy when all it accomplishes is to restrict mc do do certain stuff. -Also i was hoping for there to be some romance but MC is a blockhead Also don't get me started on MC secrecy. Hides his cultivation from his family for 270 chapters when all they do is worrie for him. Like they are not bad people like you might think they will backstab him or whatever. Even if its only to his grandpa & mother but NOOO he can't tell them shit . They took care of him when he was a retard for 6 years then again when he was training (aka not moving) for another 3/4 years. Yet he can't tell them he is strong and moving all over the place they still think he is a weak shit. We also know noting abut the world. Like all i can say you is eummm i think there are more continents. oo Yea and the last one, there is so much F I L L E R Idk there is so much more that pisses me off but ill stop here.

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Rise of the Demon God

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House
HouseLv15House

The author does get 10/10 He reads like all comments & stuff so that's always a + I also forgot to say i feel letdown with the harem / r18 / romance stuff We get it like ones in 80-100 chapters.

House
HouseLv15House

Ill add one more thingy I like the story might have been harsh in the points should probs be 3.5⭐. If i read this novel like 2-3 years ago i would have eaten it all up in a jiffy. But sins i must have read at least 100k chapters I'm getting harsher and harsher on what I read. And I'm getting more nitpicky on stuff that would not have bothert me before. So if your fairly new to novels this would probs not have bothered you. Thought i would point it out sins it was on my mind. Btw I will still finish it ill just let it rest for a bit :) Keep up the good work author!!!

ItsDarkness
ItsDarknessLv10ItsDarkness

you realise theres a lot more fighting after that and at one point he goes crazy and wipes out an entire city right? I mean like millions of people so what about killing? his goal is just trying to get stronger ig

House
HouseLv15House

What Chapter are you on? (might pick it up again) But I still stand by my review i expected more.

ItsDarkness:you realise theres a lot more fighting after that and at one point he goes crazy and wipes out an entire city right? I mean like millions of people so what about killing? his goal is just trying to get stronger ig
ItsDarkness
ItsDarknessLv10ItsDarkness

Ah I'm on the latest chapter

House:What Chapter are you on? (might pick it up again) But I still stand by my review i expected more.