Review Detail of Vi_Si in Master Of Erossu Book

I could only last until chapter 55. Damn. You wrote a +18 story for people below 15. Seriously... What were you thinking man? Don't get me wrong. I appreciate the author's effort but his thinking or rather mindset is too immature imho. I don't know how old are you but I hope you get better when you mature enough. You have a good writing style. The only thing that is lacking like I mentioned your mindset that is yet to be mature enough to write novels in this genre. Keep up the good work.