Review Detail of Kamatis in Adventures of a normal human

Yeet!!! Here comes the review and I'll leave an honest one, bro. Your story is interesting, narration was unique, and somehow this kind of narration piques my interest. But...!!! The pacing is going too fast? Maybe you should build your world more... because It's already 11 chapters and I'm still bothered and doesn't know the world well or even the era they're in now... But still, this has a great potential bro, keep it up!!!