Review Detail of DKYMuffinman in Erorr93
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I really enjoyed what is written so far. Little grammar stuff here and there overall not bad. Only I would add maybe in is thinking of talk can put Ferris said, Ferris thought, or thought Ferris that will make it less confusing. Please write mre.
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Random_Asian
Liked it!
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Random_AsianAuthorRandom_Asian
I did it in the new chapeters when I returned and I feel very cringy right now I AM So sorry I'll go write my will
Random_Asian:Oi josuke
Random_AsianAuthorRandom_Asian
I did it in the new chapeters when I returned and I feel very cringy right now I AM So sorry I'll go write my will
Random_Asian:Oi josuke