Review Detail of Annette9 in - First Love -
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What a beautiful story! And the way the author esprime the character's feeling is so realistic. I feel the happiness, the sorrowfulness, the embarrassment, the frustration and all the feeling of the protagonists. I appreciate that is a very realistic story. It tells us that not always there is a happy ending. That some time the person you love the most can really hurt you, and that is not simple forgive that persone. Or may I say is not correct for you to forgive that persone no matter what, only because you love him and he tell you "sorry", but he continues to hurt you and claims you have to understand him. The author say there is a second part .... (Spoilers so if you don't want to read stop reading.....) ...and I hope she finds someone else. After he oblige her to abort they baby and the crap he do for his sense of inferiority, I don't see how she can forgive him. Now she is not the adolescent she was, so I thought she will not be so easy fooled by him like before (when she forgive almost anything with a stupid "sorry I know I am a asshole but you have to understand, I have to make proud my disgusting grandpa who all his life treat my mother like s*it. A very ration and compressible thought ahaha). Anyway, although in the end she returns with him and forgive him I would gladly read the story because I love the way the author write her story❤️! (Sorry for the grammatical errors, but english is my third language and I still learning)
- First Love -
MeriemR
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Thank you soooo much for the kind words. It makes me extremely happy when a reader likes my story. You said so much that it felt like I was talking about my own story hahahaha that is exactly how I felt about it. Thanks again. I will work on the second part, but right now I am working on a fantasy. It's a little different but feel free to check it out ❤❤❤
Thank you for your reply. I really think you are a good writer. I discovered this story because I was reading the other your story, I liked your way of writing so I thought to try to read also this your other work. And I glad I do this because it don't disappoint me😊. I will wait for the other part of the story with anticipation, but I understand you want to concentrate on the other. Anyway good luck.
MeriemR:Thank you soooo much for the kind words. It makes me extremely happy when a reader likes my story. You said so much that it felt like I was talking about my own story hahahaha that is exactly how I felt about it. Thanks again. I will work on the second part, but right now I am working on a fantasy. It's a little different but feel free to check it out ❤❤❤
Annette9:Thank you for your reply. I really think you are a good writer. I discovered this story because I was reading the other your story, I liked your way of writing so I thought to try to read also this your other work. And I glad I do this because it don't disappoint me😊. I will wait for the other part of the story with anticipation, but I understand you want to concentrate on the other. Anyway good luck.
