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Review Detail of Adam in Pocket Hunting Dimension

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Adam
AdamLv53yrAdam

The premise? Great. Main character can enter hunting dimension, hunt stuff, level up, great fun idea. The problems? Harem is forced. MC finds out he was adopted, and immediately mother tries to get them in a relationship, and sister is in love with him, whereas the dad doesn't want MC to "steal" his daughter. Every fake character introduced feels like their just a spare harem member if author decides he needs another. MC is constantly beaten up by the females, and abused both mentally and physically. The emotions of lots of characters is 2d, and the way they express it is also the same, for example after chapter 60, there is bare minimum 1 mouth spasm, and you can have as many as 30 in a chapter. The main character? He was reincarnated thousands of years into the future, but not much has changed technologically, and don't expect the fact that he was reincarnated to be brought up after chapter 10, it's as if it never happened. The main character constantly tries to joke about how handsome and low key he is, while announcing how powerful he is. Every time someone pays attention to him he remarks, they must have realised how handsome I am. He constantly acts like a fool, and even after so many life or death situations, he's not grown at all, after hundreds of chapters he's the exact same person he was at chapter 30, naïve and narcissistic while thinking he is humble, constantly lying about how strong he is to teammates, endangering their lives only to break out as more powerful and save the day to "save them face". The humour? Jokes are really repetitive, and semi funny situations are reused 3 to 5 times, first time has a decent chance of me laughing as it's unexpected, but when your predicting the next line the MC will say as he did it 20 chapters ago, it just isn't funny. The pros? Translation quality is decent, speed of updates is good, and ehhh..... MC is super strong for his level, like he skips like a crazy amount of levels? If that's a pro for you. Overall if you want to turn your brain off and binge, it's perfect, but if you want engagement it's a pass

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Pocket Hunting Dimension

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Adam
AdamLv5Adam

Also I forgot to mention, MC doesn't loot like 90% of his kills, and then complains he is poor, he also destroys the expenses space ships of enemies, that even he has to rent, and is liable for damages, instead of looting them.

Adam
AdamLv5Adam

The majority of 5 star reviews of this novel are when it was in the voting for the energy stone thing, and they're actually accurate for the first 60 chapters are actually great, none of my problems listed are part of it, also chapter length drops considerably after first 60