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Miksenoj
MiksenojLv114yrMiksenoj

This story was just too boring, couldn’t make it past chapter 28, let me know if it gets better later but currently I couldn’t get into it. (Better = little sister dead/no longer mentioned; Main characters EQ/IQ is a lot higher; the fights are smarter than standing round a corner and punching a line of monsters that come through one at a time and finally that the worlds setting is shown, e.g. the parents job is explained, currently the story gives no details in this regard, they could be making and selling board games but that wouldn’t fit the setting.) The characters are stupid and annoying. I can’t tell what annoys me more, the main character or the little ‘sister’ the top 4 mentioned characters are the main character the ‘sister’ and the parents all of which I currently can’t stand. The only story development is the main character gets stronger and the sister can no longer bully him physically so she must do it in other ways while he enjoys every bit of it. Maybe the story will develop when he goes to another planet but I doubt it, it will probably feel the exact same no matter the planet, just with different monsters on it. The world background is ludicrous, and all I know so far is that they can travel anywhere in space and have met many other races which are either good or bad, bad being insect monsters and other ugly things while the good races are the elves(only race mentioned in passing), humans are apparently one of if not the weakest race and only survived with the help of the elves yet I have only seen human so far and other bad races through the vr game he played, unless they’re all mixed raced half elves now, don’t know because the story hasn’t gone into any detail about this. Bad/10

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Midnights_Slave
Midnights_SlaveLv13Midnights_Slave

It does get better.

Lonmar
LonmarLv7Lonmar

actually no. if you don't like in the first 20 chapters, you can't like this story. because it gets worse very quickly!