Review Detail of Jarek_Forfinger in Eodem: a Rifle and Sword Adventure

From the very beginning, the author's imbecility and lack of logic destroys the story. The very landing on an alien planet and the lack, or rather debility and lack of logic in the lack of defense or guards in the camp. It contradicts completely sound logic. The author treats the reader like an idiot with IQ5 who has no idea what he is reading. CRAP,no logic Author IQ5 . Rating minus 50.