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Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv114yrWanderingimmortal

Ok here my honest review at reading up to 338 chapters Am honestly not good at reviewing but I try my best at this one (others should take a considerable at reviewing if they don't like this novel other just post 3 star short review without even explaining more(my English sucks😂ok!) WQ:am expert at reading but not writing in English so i get this @ 4.0 for the style of your writing is kinda bland from 3rd perspective giving me the feels that it's not enough SOU:Got no problem with this, just don't push yourself to release a chapter in rush for a greater story SD:for reading many ching ching novels I like to say that I love this one I don't complain about the mc apst for being a trauma boy ok and so far the story is progressing rapidly for me and make me think that the chaos is just a small part of the superpower in myriads realms like there something more big coming than the great war and wangling another past self?or just a metaphor for the chaos self?? CD:okokok am sucks at reviewing so lets get this done already I like the mc not a cocky**** and the mc stop being a paranoid in the latest chapter and for the enemy oh shit I forget the others and for the others? while......just keep improving your character development am no good at this Ok so next is WB:am feeling that there more than the chaos, heaven,hell,realms Am not surprised there even a abyss demons so why not created more realms or universes!!!if there is more powerful than gods then Ok here's my review good luck at reading this🙃👍 @lso if others read this and want to leave a bad review too pls just fucking explained why with more depth in it! You ruined the author effort

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Celestial Peak

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Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv11Wanderingimmortal

Ok am wrong in sou what I mean is don't rush the story for the stability of the update

Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv11Wanderingimmortal

Past I mean in SD sorry again am not looking too much in my review 🤦

Simple_Dynasty
Simple_DynastyAuthorSimple_Dynasty

Um, Thank you for the review I'll keep your words in mind, don't worry I am not trying to rush the story the pieces is just starting to align, Um if it is not a hassle may I know what u mean about the writing style? I also want to improve and I wish to learn my deficiencies so my next time writing will be netter. Thanks again :)

Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv11Wanderingimmortal

Well am a no writer😂 but I from my perspective it's about expression of thoughts of how you write a story and differs from author to author of how they write a story in the same genre like comparing your writing to others maybe?Ok I not really in to this topic am not a author/writer so you can just Google it for yourself😇

Simple_Dynasty:Um, Thank you for the review I'll keep your words in mind, don't worry I am not trying to rush the story the pieces is just starting to align, Um if it is not a hassle may I know what u mean about the writing style? I also want to improve and I wish to learn my deficiencies so my next time writing will be netter. Thanks again :)
Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv11Wanderingimmortal

Oh I forgot again your grammars is good with a little errors only

Simple_Dynasty:Um, Thank you for the review I'll keep your words in mind, don't worry I am not trying to rush the story the pieces is just starting to align, Um if it is not a hassle may I know what u mean about the writing style? I also want to improve and I wish to learn my deficiencies so my next time writing will be netter. Thanks again :)
Simple_Dynasty
Simple_DynastyAuthorSimple_Dynasty

Ah thanks :)

Wanderingimmortal:Oh I forgot again your grammars is good with a little errors only
Simple_Dynasty
Simple_DynastyAuthorSimple_Dynasty

Ah thanks :)

Wanderingimmortal:Oh I forgot again your grammars is good with a little errors only