Review Detail of ara_sh in Naked Sword Art
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Until ch 28: No plot, MC just wandering around and fucking girls without a goal. No world building. All characters including MC are bland, every girls that mentioned in novel are just holes and nothing more.
Naked Sword Art
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ara_shLv2ara_sh
Until ch 48: still no goal for MC. world building is still bad. your writing and character development gets better though but not good enough. I think I should drop it. Thanks.
RaLegacy:comeback and review it after reading a bit more.
BlackSwordman1234Lv14BlackSwordman1234
ara_sh:Until ch 48: still no goal for MC. world building is still bad. your writing and character development gets better though but not good enough. I think I should drop it. Thanks.