Review Detail of Grant_G in Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman
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The quality of this book baffles me. It started out well with a relaxed pacing and good grammar. But after 15 chapters took a sharp nose dive into the all too common mixed past-present tense grammar, horribly choppy pacing, and unclarified unexplained ideas. I think the idea is interesting, and I was even willing to bare with the cliche video game system, but the writing quality became too terrible and ruined my enjoyment.
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman
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Finally a truthfull review. I'm not a native English speaker and the amount of grammar errors I found is amazing, but one of the things that irks me the most in this novel is the incoherence between sentences, I thought I could ignore it but after chapter 30 (when the story picks up the pace and gets more dialogs) it's was unbearable. The idea seems original and is quite nice, it's a shame that the author can't build a linear structure in the chapters. I can't believe that there are comments claiming that this is one of the best novels they've read, like, do you even read?
Finally a truthfull review. I'm not a native English speaker and the amount of grammar errors I found is amazing, but one of the things that irks me the most in this novel is the incoherence between sentences, I thought I could ignore it but after chapter 30 (when the story picks up the pace and gets more dialogs) it's was unbearable. The idea seems original and is quite nice, it's a shame that the author can't build a linear structure in the chapters. I can't believe that there are comments claiming that this is one of the best novels they've read, like, do you even read?