Review Detail of Read_hd_chan in Way of the Knights

I fairly like this book, I mean it does go on and on, something I don't like, but the world building, the characters, quite nice! Not sure if it's a translation thing or a writing quality from original but there's quite a few grammatical errors, spelling errors, words just left out, and sentences that only make sense if you restructure them in your mind. Honestly the book could do with a lot less information dumps, random scenes that wont matter even 2 chapters later, and the like, but even then I think I'll keep up with this one! I'm enjoying it quite a bit.