Review Detail of Bekah_W in Way of the Knights

Part of me is tired of the really long stories like this, but then a story like this comes along and just drags me in and I'm like... I WANT MORE! The grammar or translation (not sure which) isn't spectacular, sometimes whole words are missing, there are too many words, or complete misspelling, but it's not hard to understand what's going on. I do think there is too much information sometimes and I just wanna skip through things and condense it all down, this could use a good editor! Yet, other than there are too many chapters I also don't mind it and will skim through things that don't seem too important, so far, I haven't needed to go back to read what I skimmed, or outright skipped. I really like the Characters though and keep rooting for them even if we only see them for a short amount of time. The "world" is huge and there's lots of stuff Raven needs and wants to do, but sometimes a "side story" gets frustrating when I just wanna see more of other things. Yes, is bada****, yes he still has lots to learn, but really do we need to see so much of it? CONDENSE! I think I need to go ready some stories with only 1 or 3 books in their series, I'm tired of stories that seem to just drag on, even with "professionally published" books on like Amazon or whatnot. Then I can come back to this book and be ok again with it's length.