Please just please go back to how it was before. This change of perspective is really damming. I loved how you were building up this story before. Just go back to the perspective you started with. This first person is really really ****ty. I only gave 2 stars for writing quality because you suddenly changed the way you were writing. I hope you get well soon and hope you start writing in 3rd person perspective again. Thank You.
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