One of the best starting chapters for a novel from what i have read. I hope that the author will continue this novel and make it a huge success. And it is my suggestion that if you introduce a new harem member, dont forget to improve the characters personality and I also suggest that you dont introduce too many harem members and instead focus on a few members at the initial stage of your novel.
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