Review Detail of Deamonking1224 in Heavenly Saga

The story line is well thought out. The pace is good with no major leaps or large times wasted in single thing. Character development is going nicely, and no major contradictions with events or peoples action. However, some of the writing of “That spell”, “Use that”, and such is annoying. Its fine once or twice but everytime is too much. Specially since the next sentence it is named said soell. I know the author is trying for suspense, but here it is better to just use the name or such. For example, instand of saying “use that”, it would go better to say “use water guard” or “ use your new spell.”