Review Detail of FalenSol in Record of Genesis: Anime Battefields

Hoping this one goes on for a bit and advances well. Bluntly speaking I’m hoping for more character development, which, do to previous works, leads me to believe you are fairly decent at, however I myself am quite fond of the numbers and technicalities put into this novel so far, so I am a fan, however, if your really want to do perfect, I’d recommend checking out the likes of Einlion’s work and Glyax’s among a variety of others who do well. Primarily for inspiration and some tips/guidelines to help progress your own style, and because their stories are enjoyable to me, and I’d recommend them. Not sure how helpful this is, but let’s get you your rating and do keep up the good work. I’m rooting for you, so good luck with your story, and try to take this one all the way to a suitable ending, which is all readers ever want from authors.