Review Detail of Sani2341 in The Forgotten Knights: Year One (Web Novel)

So appologies up front, this review may end up sounding quite harsh, but I do think this story culd profit from it. It's issues begin right with the first paragraph which is filled with numerous Grammar mistakes(wrong tenses/verbforms). Further more, most of this story's way too long paragraphs could eithe rbe two sentence footnotes, or expanded into a full chapter of Webnovel's average lenght(1000-2000 words). Which brings me to the worst bit: the gigantic size of the chapter. According to the app, it's about 2-3 times the size of other Webnovel stories I read. ANd on top of that I just got sick of the 'glimpse of backstory then somethign completly different' style of writing, which hadn't evne named the main Character, or given him any kind of characterization by the time I just couldn't bear to read on.