Review Detail of Zhanye in In Earth-38, With A Sharingan

I honestly found a very promising story, but the disappointment was big, 6 chapters and I didn't enjoy anything, I wasn't curious about the future, I didn't feel immersed in the story, I felt I was watching a slide show that I will probably forget in 15 minutes. Note: I hope you learn from criticism instead of deleting comments and pretending it never happened.