Review Detail of sunny_city in I Hate You, Devil!

It is peculiar to note that the span of the story, encompassing over 100 chapters, is condensed within a mere 10 days. The progression of events, such as the initial meeting followed by a proposal and subsequent cohabitation with twin children, appears to be hasty and unrealistic. Furthermore, the development of the romantic relationship between the characters is rushed, with a kiss occurring on the 6th day and discussions of falling in love on the 9th. The author may benefit from considering a longer time frame and allowing for a more gradual and believable progression of events in the story.