The fanfic has a very good storyline. The story had a good base it begin which itself is its biggest strength. It just added to the quality of the writing The characters sketch is on par with the storyline. I would like to suggest the author to focus at bit more on the emotions of the all characters both good and bad. It would add a realistic touch to the story. Also try to bring up other characters more often with the main ones. I was able to read the story without being distracted at any point. I should admit that I'm hooked to the fanfic, now I am waiting to get the next update. Overall I liked the story for it's quality of writing and and glad I read this .
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