A fairer review now that I've actually read it. First off this actually has some world buildings thanks to the first chapter. So yeah. The english is quite good and definitely heads and shoulders above a good chunk of fanfictions here. Stability so far is pretty nice. Like maybe around 1.5k words per chapter after the 1st chap? Story is well, not much has happened and I'd like to say it has good pace but MC literally got one of the most used jutsu in fanfictions that is typically reserved for OP MC or endgame ****. Hiraishin. Character design is meh so far This is just a fairer review and once it gets 20 chaps ima review again and hopefully I get a better feel of things.
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