Review Detail of anon88 in New life (female omegaverse)

This is a review of the first three chapters. The story is a light hearted omegaverse romance between a female alpha doctor and a female omega nanny. It looks like this will be light and fluffy story with only consensual sexual activity. The main characters start out with negative views of each other, but gain a better option of each other after repeated interactions. The author is not a native speaker of English, but they are capable of writing a funny romantic comedy in English. There are a few grammar issues. A common mistake is the use of the wrong pronoun gender. The wrong gender was used several times in the first chapter. As a result, I was not sure that the lead characters were both female until the third chapter. Additionally, some sentence structures used do not make sense in English. For example: “You crush!” In English, an additional verb is needed such as; “You have a crush!” Or “You are crushing on her!” Except for the pronoun genders, these mistakes are easy to ignore and still understand the author’s meaning.