Review Detail of Luomaze in Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral (COMPLETED)

It's decent compared to the stuff I have seen. Overall it's complete and it has a fast pace of moving through the plot. Most of the plot is poorly written but it's entertaining.if anything it's a short read and it's completed and I hope the author has grown since they wrote this.I want to ignore the author ranting but I have to mention it. Dude needs to chill and just understand not everyone cares, some people like to troll, and learn how to take feedback. If it can make your writing better you should try to understand every review and grow. So far the author is a whiny baby so I hope they have changed since this story is old.