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Abel is a master at every occupation and everything is handed to him. He can randomly fire off a spell during practice and discover a priceless artifact on the ground. Zero thought is put into development. Just as an example, Abel becomes a master blacksmith, trains to be stronger than his teacher, rises to a level 2 wizard, learns the most complicated language (elvish), and is an adept runesmith. I'm positive I missed some other accomplishments. How long did all of this take? less than a year. Abel is 1e when he goes to his mentor, and is still 13 after all of the advancements. And this is before he unlocks his magical camp location that slows down time to help him train. It just gets more and more ridiculous as the novel goes on. The author needs to learn to let the novel breathe, or it just seems like a list of accomplishments without having earned anything.

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