Review Detail of Fluffy_Menace in Abe the Wizard

This is a story you would expect from a Chinese amateur writer, it's very annoying. The mc doesn't show any signs of growth both physically and story wise. The author just dumps overhyped achievements and abilities on him without letting us see the mc growing to fit these achievements. When one writes a story and the setting is let's say mediaeval time the content of the story must be close related to medieval times, so you don't just write a story and the setting is in mediaeval times and the content of the story is like Chinese stuff example in a story he was like the mc bought qi condensing pills or potions, stuff like this you know that the author is an amateur Chinese writer. And that's one of the major bads I have all about the story.that's why I wanted to write I was just winded story I was like I'm not getting the story understand the MC is a 13 year old and he has a past everybody in that you don't give him time to go physically and make their the power still look right to him so yeah story is very frustrated really frustrated that every time have to complain about it. the idea behind the stories amazing .