Review Detail of TinyOrc in Abe the Wizard
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Characters have no hair color, height, clothing, physical features of any kind described. 1 for character design. Translation is using a mixture of machine translation and limited edits. Translates many words wrong such as 'gun' instead of 'spear'. 1 for translation quality. Story development has no goal, conflict, interesting origin, travel, nor rivalry. 1 for story development. The background of the world have no names of continents, kingdoms, planets, nor planes. Limited only to the bare necessary for the main character to be present inside a castle or town, etc. No interesting landmarks or anything at all really. 1 for world background. Updates are likely to stop before completion as this is Qidian after all. 1 for updates until proven otherwise.
Abe the Wizard
The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds
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Can you not use imagination to just think of what someone could look like? Don't know how far you read, but there was a goal. The original goal was to get back to Earth and then there were other goals that were completed. I agree that it is odd that the world has no name, but it does have names for the different lands and continents. There is world background if you continued to read. The world is at war with an angel that escaped the destruction of the Dark World and the arch angel Tyrell is called the demon of the sky. For the last 10,000 years he has been gathering worshipers and palidins to fight for him. He wants to take over the world and become a world class being and the rest of the world is trying to destroy him. The central continent is the main and most important continent where the battle with the the demon in the sky is. All the subcontinents like the holy land are used to train people to use as fodder in the war and all the ones born on the central continent have an advantage and can even become god level at the level of 36 wizards while subcontinents have difficulty even getting anyone to the advanced level of 16. At the end Abel almost completes his original goal to go back to Earth and it ends with him starting his journey through space concurring all the planets on the way.
Daku_Doragon:Can you not use imagination to just think of what someone could look like? Don't know how far you read, but there was a goal. The original goal was to get back to Earth and then there were other goals that were completed. I agree that it is odd that the world has no name, but it does have names for the different lands and continents. There is world background if you continued to read. The world is at war with an angel that escaped the destruction of the Dark World and the arch angel Tyrell is called the demon of the sky. For the last 10,000 years he has been gathering worshipers and palidins to fight for him. He wants to take over the world and become a world class being and the rest of the world is trying to destroy him. The central continent is the main and most important continent where the battle with the the demon in the sky is. All the subcontinents like the holy land are used to train people to use as fodder in the war and all the ones born on the central continent have an advantage and can even become god level at the level of 36 wizards while subcontinents have difficulty even getting anyone to the advanced level of 16. At the end Abel almost completes his original goal to go back to Earth and it ends with him starting his journey through space concurring all the planets on the way.
Without physical descriptions this could have also been set in the underworld and everyone was a spirit
Daku_Doragon:Can you not use imagination to just think of what someone could look like? Don't know how far you read, but there was a goal. The original goal was to get back to Earth and then there were other goals that were completed. I agree that it is odd that the world has no name, but it does have names for the different lands and continents. There is world background if you continued to read. The world is at war with an angel that escaped the destruction of the Dark World and the arch angel Tyrell is called the demon of the sky. For the last 10,000 years he has been gathering worshipers and palidins to fight for him. He wants to take over the world and become a world class being and the rest of the world is trying to destroy him. The central continent is the main and most important continent where the battle with the the demon in the sky is. All the subcontinents like the holy land are used to train people to use as fodder in the war and all the ones born on the central continent have an advantage and can even become god level at the level of 36 wizards while subcontinents have difficulty even getting anyone to the advanced level of 16. At the end Abel almost completes his original goal to go back to Earth and it ends with him starting his journey through space concurring all the planets on the way.
that entire plot I just read from you IM 500+ CHAPTERS IN AND HAVEN'T SEEN A SINGLE THING ABOUT THAT BRUH WHO TF GONNA READ THAT FAR
Daku_Doragon:Can you not use imagination to just think of what someone could look like? Don't know how far you read, but there was a goal. The original goal was to get back to Earth and then there were other goals that were completed. I agree that it is odd that the world has no name, but it does have names for the different lands and continents. There is world background if you continued to read. The world is at war with an angel that escaped the destruction of the Dark World and the arch angel Tyrell is called the demon of the sky. For the last 10,000 years he has been gathering worshipers and palidins to fight for him. He wants to take over the world and become a world class being and the rest of the world is trying to destroy him. The central continent is the main and most important continent where the battle with the the demon in the sky is. All the subcontinents like the holy land are used to train people to use as fodder in the war and all the ones born on the central continent have an advantage and can even become god level at the level of 36 wizards while subcontinents have difficulty even getting anyone to the advanced level of 16. At the end Abel almost completes his original goal to go back to Earth and it ends with him starting his journey through space concurring all the planets on the way.
Bored_into_sub:that entire plot I just read from you IM 500+ CHAPTERS IN AND HAVEN'T SEEN A SINGLE THING ABOUT THAT BRUH WHO TF GONNA READ THAT FAR