Review Detail of LazyPotato22 in Erotic Novels

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LazyPotato22Lv14yrLazyPotato22

It was okay. Might not be exactly what you would find, but it is something to redo in the future. The author might want to consider doing a bit more with the whole concept of the book.

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Alexander_StoneLv1Alexander_Stone

Hey Lazypotato22, i was wondering if you could read some of my works and give me an honest opinion? Its just i need people to tell me what to improve and i think you could? Thank you x

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