Review Detail of IntanLestari in Reborn: The Unexpected Twist

I've read this book until chapter 66, this is my review as far as i read : *writing quality : 8/10 it's really good , the writer is really talented but there is some typo and weird grammar, some of the events feels jumping out of nowhere without bridge *stability of updating : 10/10 It's already completed when i start reading this *story development : 6/10 the face slapping is too little (almost none for me) and the story is a little bit slow to my liking , but it's still fast enough to keep me going on and the story itself keep saying some mystery that make me want to know more *character design: 6/10 I'm sorry but this still feel like another character from any other novel with this two or more male character that suddenly fall in love with MC without rhyme or reason, it kinda confuse me about why jaehyun date her if in her last life he doesn't really like her, the writer too focused in the mystery thing but somehow forgot about love development between character *world background : 6/10 The world background a little bit too simple like our 21st century modern world with some rich family in there This story has so many potential, i wish my review could help the writer to improve in some aspect, and thank you for your beautiful story