Review Detail of _Neith_ in Haven Online
Review detail
So far this is a spectacular read. Granted some things leave you a but confused because the life story of why the mc is the way he is, is extremely forced and being afraid of women even though he's gay is kind of annoying though I can sorta understand that since he's wheel chair bound... I'm getting off track and rambling. Besides all that everything else is wonderful I especially love that in the vvmo you have picked a race besides humans. That is so annoying everyone wants to be a human or undead like come on stfu. With bs reasons like oh I'm an expert martial artist so I have to be human hate those craps. And undead stories are getting over played as well. But you came way out of left field with a dryad race! Wonderful I am very excited to see what else you are going to do. Other than that hmm well I'll guess I'll have to see since everything is standard MMORPG format for games like this. Let your creativity run wild author so I can have a wonderful read.
Haven Online
Momocatt
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I don't think undead stories are iverplayed. I don't think I've read many that are undead ( like skelotons or bone dragons stuff like that). I have seen lots of slime and other stuff like that. If you known alot of undead novels let me know please. I like it when they have stuff like subordinates. Also been cruel is no issue. But your right about human, everything is human. Also there's alot of prejudice against races which MC ins't, it sucks when that happens (though there are lots of cases were MC ins't human and there are still prejudices' towards any race thats not humans; Its honestly annoying, for example, god of games says lizards people are dumer than humans. WTF why are they dumer than people? They speak live, have jobs, do everythign we do, just because we don't understand them (in the story) and they don't look like us doesn't mean their retarded.
Was reading, was enjoying it but the relationship felt way forced Imo. Plus im not really into gay reads. You guys do you tho.
Reg_LXIX:Dropping it cuz the mc is gay
Skelatron:Was reading, was enjoying it but the relationship felt way forced Imo. Plus im not really into gay reads. You guys do you tho.
Momocatt:Do you mean Wei and Wandering Sound relationship, because Xinya didn't meet the ML yet...
his rich buddy?? I think you must be thinking of another novel, but that's ok. Thanks for the feedback anyway.
Skelatron:Naw with his rich budy. Felt forced lol.
The guy that ditches his family because he doesn't want to be a ranker follows a guy he just met for the hell of it. He seems overly friendly, but you gotta realise most of this is my opinion. The crafting mechanics and game mechanics are great but being able to craft items like potions instead of buying the potion, any person who plays professionally would see the value in it, esspessaly if the items to make it are limited to alchemy bags. Plus coins are able to be exchanged for irl currency. Who wouldn't min max coins for a balanced play style. Again opinions. Plus im rusty on this novels information. I read it brefly a bit back. Good concepts but the tone just wasnt for me.
Momocatt:his rich buddy?? I think you must be thinking of another novel, but that's ok. Thanks for the feedback anyway.
The guy that ditches his family because he doesn't want to be a ranker follows a guy he just met for the hell of it. He seems overly friendly, but you gotta realise most of this is my opinion. The crafting mechanics and game mechanics are great but being able to craft items like potions instead of buying the potion, any person who plays professionally would see the value in it, esspessaly if the items to make it are limited to alchemy bags. Plus coins are able to be exchanged for irl currency. Who wouldn't min max coins for a balanced play style. Again opinions. Plus im rusty on this novels information. I read it brefly a bit back. Good concepts but the tone just wasnt for me.
Momocatt:his rich buddy?? I think you must be thinking of another novel, but that's ok. Thanks for the feedback anyway.