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Hello! Your story has an interesting opening. Though he admits that everyone is calling him the evil emperor, I don’t think their exchange give me that impression so I truly understand why Ling Ai is surprised by this. I truly understand why grandpa keeps a secret about his true identity. When you’re a grand master, everyone would come to become your apprentice, including people who want to test out their power for fame. I hope Ling Ai will inherit his techniques and become a great martial artist someday. =) I’m starting to see the main idea of the story in chapter 3. Ling Ai’s life is filled with the love from her grandfather while the emperor has everything but feel so empty. I think with his super vision, he already sees something he’s seeking in Ling Ai which is why he seems to be interested in her. But oh dear God... I feel so satisfied when he finds out that he’s switching body with Ling Ai. I guess karma has started its punishment for the bad deeds he (possibly?) had done. I can just wish him luck living with *ehem* swollen chest. I think your story has an interesting premise and I would like to continue this later (I’m reading up to chap 5). XD Your descriptions are easy to be imagined. The only thing you might want to consider revise in case you’re editing the story maybe something like: “Wait! Please wait!” he sighed, “Let’s not rush things, okay?”  try to make the onomatopoiea a sentence. Then you’re good to go. =) Also, may I point on how beautiful the cover art is? You have a very nice drawing! =) Thank you for your hard work on this book, Author!

I tamed the Most Evil Emperor

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Hello there RikkaLiao! Thank you for that veracious comment and I find it hilarious too! Hahaha, honestly you made me laugh. I had good time reading your review, this one deserves a double thumbs up! Because not only that you've pointed out what's interesting to the story but you also had understood it relatively your way. And that what makes it exciting. Haha "Thanks for your advice also! I'll keep that in mind and improve my writing. Hoping to see you until the end." Author sighed.