Review Detail of Capricious_Pheonix in The Intelligent Potter
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Overall great story....I had first come across it on ffnet. .... , and had come to web novel in hopes of seeing a New chapter.....who knew it would leave me hoodwinked to it... Anyways you write great....although the chapters are a bit short.... You have gracefully and successfully combined several plot threads, and the tapestry u r weaving of the TIP is quite great...... And the last chapter, about homecoming of Tom is just great....on edge of my seat, waiting for what happens next.... Well Tom become an ally??
The Intelligent Potter
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Thanks! Yeah, my chapters are quite short, but idrk how to write longer ones for now. Maybe if I start longer stories in the future, I can create them with longer chapters but for TIP, I think I'm going to stick with them as they are. Don't want to reveal too much about chapters to come, but a lot of things are going to culminate real soon with regards to Tom.