Review Detail of Hellequin90 in The Intelligent Potter
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Good story so far. My only complaint is that in later chapters you start to post the last few paragraphs of the previous chapter like we need a recap of what we just read. I do not believe this is necessary, but other than that I have greatly enjoyed your story and hope you continue it.
The Intelligent Potter
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It seems unnecessary here because I posted all the chapters together, but these 84 chapters were originally posted across 3 years, with sometimes months between chapters, so I did find that it helped some people connect chapters as well as help me understand what I'm writing about after a long break in writing.