Review Detail of Lize in Naruto fanfic:new jinchuriki

Hello author here, I made him a bit mature a early and send him on the journey so as to not make a gap too huge in the ages of him and Naruto. Also being able to reach the village under Minato will help him to be wit Uzumaki rather than Uchiha who will be killed if the village was attacked

And thank you for reading

And thank you for reading

Ah.. but really.. 2yo... Is tooo early.. If you make him.... hmmm.. let say 5 - 6 yo.. Maybe i can accept it.. Because if it like that.. you will make him the same age as itachi.. Sasuke is 12 - 13 yo in the start of the series.. While itachi is 17 - 18 yo.. Which mean that he atleast 5 when kurama attack.. Or naruto born.. Oh well.. Just forget it.. Keep on writting.. Beside the age problem.. I really like your story.. 😅😅😅

Who cares, there were people in fanfics who in the next sec got rinnesharingan, so all in all not really odd.

Who cares, there were people in fanfics who in the next sec got rinnesharingan, so all in all not really odd.

The problem in here is the age.. the mc is too young.. And what kind of the he did when he only a baby.. And he isnt reincarnate people.. so pure baby.. I dont like baby mc.. that already can do so many thing.. because for me there will be no room for character development.. maybe some can pull it off, but thats only minority.. While in this story.. author force mc to be mature too early because he dont want to have a big age gap with other character.. And he inconsistence with mc power level.. He nerf him soo hard after so many thing he did.. Just read it then you will understand.. If you already read it and still didnt understand my point than thats mean we have diff view.. Ahahaha..