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I like the story. I've read till around chapter 150. It would have been so much better if this book concentrated more on the main couple Sera and Lucifer. I think they are becoming second leads because I'm seeing more of Ad and yin than the main couple. Like there's half a chapter of our main couple and 2 chapters of second leads in between. You could've made another book for them. And another small suggestion don't always skip from scene to scene when that particular scene is not complete. It's like one particular scene is cut into many parts. It's not very convenient to read like we are reading a scene between Sera and Lucifer and all of a sudden you skip to another scene between ad and yinyin. Then we again come back to Sera and Lucifer's scene. So I think it would be better if it's in one stretch.

The Runaway Bride's Love Story! (On Hiatus~)

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