Review Detail of Piggy in Asgardian Sword God
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The story is fantastic overall, a good read but the grammar needs fixing around and the way you interpret how asgardians talk. I dont think asgardians would say "no way". The way you make them speak is like how people in the 21st century would speaks and not ancient like(dont know how to describe it). Idk, the way you interpret how they speak really bothers me.
Asgardian Sword God
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You are correct in your review but your efforts are wasted. Details is not a strong point here. Going to Asgard and using Katana, presumably he knew how to make one enough to explain to a blacksmith. From all the available devil fruits he had to make one up instead of using an existing one. He changed Odin's wife to make it easier, its not bad but its not a quality novel where you can see the author tried hard to make it follow the originals in any way. Personally, this is borderline wish fulfillment
ErozothDraeor:You are correct in your review but your efforts are wasted. Details is not a strong point here. Going to Asgard and using Katana, presumably he knew how to make one enough to explain to a blacksmith. From all the available devil fruits he had to make one up instead of using an existing one. He changed Odin's wife to make it easier, its not bad but its not a quality novel where you can see the author tried hard to make it follow the originals in any way. Personally, this is borderline wish fulfillment
Thanks for the comment 1. I created a new devil fruit because using existing ones, I will have to keep following their existing powers too. And in Marvel, there are beings that could snuff out galaxies in an instant. Those devil fruits would not be able to keep up with them. 2. Angerboda is the mother of Hela in the comics and in Norse myth. Though Odin is not her father, since Thor said to the guardians that Hela is his half-sister, unless Odin is not the father of Thor, I could only change the wife of Odin 3. The choice of the swords is not permanent, and right now, MC had already changed it. He did not use katanas anymore.
ErozothDraeor:You are correct in your review but your efforts are wasted. Details is not a strong point here. Going to Asgard and using Katana, presumably he knew how to make one enough to explain to a blacksmith. From all the available devil fruits he had to make one up instead of using an existing one. He changed Odin's wife to make it easier, its not bad but its not a quality novel where you can see the author tried hard to make it follow the originals in any way. Personally, this is borderline wish fulfillment
a_man_has_no_body:Thanks for the comment 1. I created a new devil fruit because using existing ones, I will have to keep following their existing powers too. And in Marvel, there are beings that could snuff out galaxies in an instant. Those devil fruits would not be able to keep up with them. 2. Angerboda is the mother of Hela in the comics and in Norse myth. Though Odin is not her father, since Thor said to the guardians that Hela is his half-sister, unless Odin is not the father of Thor, I could only change the wife of Odin 3. The choice of the swords is not permanent, and right now, MC had already changed it. He did not use katanas anymore.