It took me a while to come up with a review. So here it is. At first, I got confused at the first chapter, asking myself, 'what's going on?' But then of course as the story progresses I realized the characters are up to a bold start. Secondly, the text could use some editing. Pacing is good, alright, but I think there are some transitions the author need to fix. Overall, great job.
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