Review Detail of Quiescent_Rumble in XP Grind

I liked the start of the book very much. Then it got...childish. Woman in danger, rescue her, use some chapters to help her find a bed. Of course she is beautiful. Who would have thought that? Someones tries to hurt him, he hurts them then heals them and does not even take their money even when he really needs it? The "story" is too much that of a do-good-boy, boy scout. TOO much of a good guy. It is sickening. The writing per se is not bad, but it is always describing, never telling a story. It is like you see something on TV and describe it to someone on the phone. It is not like a book. I am sure there are professional word to describe this problem, but I have no experience in this area. I just know the writing feels weird.