Well, actually it has a lot of potential but seems to be overshadowed by the amount of "plot" (no, its actually half actual plot and a lot foreshadowing and maybe some filler here and there). There is still a few incomplete mistakes I.e : fair well = farewell (and its actually more so i just mention the one i remember) And the status format for the beasts and monster sometimes confusing I.e ; Health : high, Wisdom : Low But for humans the author used an actual numerical format (idk if its fixed like that but if she continues to use that format its bad because the information they gave is too vague) Rate : 4/4/3/4/3
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LIKECan you make a Status Sheet for Erin when he reunited with the gang ? Because we need more information about him for the last 5 years
Coolspacesquid:Thanks for the review :) I will try and change the monster formatting in the future to one that makes more sense. Sorry for the spelling mistakes I will try my best to fix them as well when I have more time đ
Seleniium:Can you make a Status Sheet for Erin when he reunited with the gang ? Because we need more information about him for the last 5 years